I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Friday, November 26, 2021
Ashlynn's discriptive sentence's.
In writing I have been working on descriptive wrting here is my work.
What sentence is your favourite?
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Kia ora Ashlynn,
ReplyDeleteGreat sentences. I really enjoyed reading them. I loved the similie 'The sand was as soft as a teddy bear'.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara TÅ«hura Education Programme Leader
good work Ashlyn you did amazing
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